Thursday 2 March 2017

StoryWeb The 2 Frogs and the Well

We have been learning to create a StoryWeb


Story By:Aesop
Settings: In the hot sun
Characters:Two frogs (one is little the other is big)
Beginning:
It was a hot sunny day and the trees were sweating, the ducks were thirsty and the frogs pond was empty. there were two frogs and they were really hot one day, so they started hopping over mountains, then they saw a well and they peeped up into it, to see if there was water left.
Middle:
so they peeped up and saw fresh water, and then the two frogs hopped in and drank a lot of water but then, the big frog said “wait what if we drink all the water” (small frog) “we will sink” (big frog) “we won't be able to jump out” (small frog) “ohhh then what do we do”(big frog)”we get out come on” so they jumped out and the small one said “but all the ponds are empty” (big frog) “i know” (small frog) “um mm okay?”
End:
so they hopped off back to their pond.when they got back there pond was full of water and they started hopping around. and they had a lovely day in their pond.
Evaluation: I thought this story was entertaining and I’d rate it 7/10.

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1 comment:

  1. Hi my name is Francesca .I am a student at Owairaka primary school. I love your post because it is describing and creative .it really gives me an idea of your story. from Francesca

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